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dreamer1775 Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 20florida |
In the silence of the night, the sound of the waves crashing on the beach, echo through my mind. the only sound in the night, is your voice, telling me you love me, always. As the waves come creeping onto the beach, with the roar of a stampeed. the warm water touches my feet. as you turn to look at me, and softly whisper, please be mine, please let me love you, always. i stand there, gazing softly into your eyes. a smile creeps across my face, as i realize, tonight, on this silent beach, as the waves crash and creep up to meet us, in this place, between the stars and the moon, i love you, more then i have i have ever felt before. and i will love you, for now, for enternity, always. kayte life is a banquet and most poor suckers are starving to death so ...live...live..live |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Dreamer, What a lovely portrayal of love. How I long to feel loved like that. Dawn |
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dreamer1775 Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 20florida |
thank you, i wrote it about my wonderful boyfriend who just left for texas to go back home. kayte life is a banquet and most poor suckers are starving to death so ...live...live..live |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Dreamer, This is really beautiful. A very loving poem. Great work. Beth~ |
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