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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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running barefoot on the beach a wave rushes in to tease my toes then back again-- and beckons follow... hand in hand and heart to heart i see the ocean in your eyes. deep from inside you i feel the tug; undertow-- let me drown in your love... -dgvarner "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- hi. love this one! makes me smile.  luv ya, tricks (your biggest fan)  "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I could never decipher bout this tricks thingy.....hehe but dgvarner, i really like this!!! the sweet feelins...the fluttery heart......wow delightful!!! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
tricks and midnight: glad you liked  this is one of those rare happy little ditties...  a friend said, "write me a poem..something pretty..." so..i set out on a mind journey, and came back from the ocean! thanks for your faithful replies dg PS: "tricks thingy"? LOL just a name i tagged her with in college..join in the fun, *WEG* "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
dgvarner, a lovely poem. really enjoyed reading this. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very beautiful! Denise |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks BRIAN, glad you enjoyed thanks for your kind reply DENISE dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
hehe...this is great!! Just like all your other stuff, dg!! I've always loved beaches and the ocean, and this makes me feel like I was there...and the part about love, I'm no expert on that, but I think you portrayed it beautifully. Maybe when I'm feeling better I'll go swimming!  Great job, as usual! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DgV, What a wonderful comparison between a natural phenomena and a relationship! i see the ocean in your eyes. deep from inside you i feel the tug; undertow-- let me drown in your love... EXCELLENT! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I love this, the analogy is fabulous and the romance divine! Love, ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks guys! it does my face good to wear this smile while reading your replies!! i'm so glad you liked it dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This sort of reminds me of a very old movie, with Burt Lancaster, I think it was Eternity. They were kissing passionettly in the waves. Whatever the title, great image.. and great read. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks PARKER--glad you could stop in for the movie hugs, dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Found this little gem wallowing on the back pages ... Glad to have found it. I love the pull of the ocean waves. Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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