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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Joy in the making A chance we will be taking Grasping hands of friends ~*Marge*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- I love this. So sweet and simple, yet so meaningful. Made me want to 'grasp' that poetic hand of yours. Thanks for sharing it, my new friend.  -vlraynes (vicky) *by the way, Marge, I got an e-mail saying that you had replied to 'Alone Together', but there is no message from you there. Anyway, I just wanted to say, thanks for taking the time to read it. I appreciate your replies.  "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, A new word for me, "senryu". This is lovely and speaks of your heart, for what would I have done without your hand of friendship. Liz |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Marge ; How wonderfully you've done this, and guess what? Liz Santos and I got to do just that yesterday. We had lunch and our hands did grasp in friendship, and it was delightful. Wish we all could get together here at passions! love, ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...what a wonderful chance to take..!!  this is so sweet marge..i wish we could all meet and grasp hands too..what a great day that would be!! love this little ditty!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Reaching out to you Gentle talent you display Joining friendship's hand ~*~ Elizabeth~ Senryu simply Haiku minus nature theme My hand holds your heart ~*~ Ellie~ Lucky, you and Liz A friendship in the making Friends meet eye to eye ~*~ DGVarner~ Fun to take the chance All friends meet on Passion's page Holding poet's hand *Thank you all so much ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Marge, I found out I thought that I was writing haikus but some of them were actually senryus--But wheteher of nature or feeling- these jokers are fun--and you do them very well, like everything else- you always give us the good stuff! Thank you, David I appreciate Marge with her own special style Always showing Class! [This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like joy to me! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ Make teacher happy Knowing you have learned lesson Smile is evident ~*~ Denise~ Oh, thank you my friend Holding hands with you from start All the way to now ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
marge this is so sweet! Juz like u *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michelle~ Sweet is the making Of new friends along the way Knowing they will stay ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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