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Never Wish Upon a Star |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Never Wish Upon a Star Never wish upon a star A million miles away Your dream will soar to space afar And never come your way Don’t toss coins into a fountain You may soon repent For money used to make a wish Is money poorly spent Don’t rely on good luck charms To master deeds you do Amulets just hang there All the effort comes from you Never knock on wood for hope That’s not where fate abides For that which happens in the morrow Only God decides Keep your dreams within your heart And to yourself be true And now and then a lovely dream Will somehow come to you Elizabeth Santos |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Liz; How utterly delighful! "And now and then a lovely dream will somehow come to you" I love the wonder and promise you have written of, in this magical poem! love, ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Liz, What pearls of wisdom you share with us here all framed in an exquisite setting. I do love what you do with poetry! David "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I love this, Elizabeth! You've said it well! Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh, so true. I love this, Elizabeth. One beautiful piece of poetry. Thank you for sharing it. -vlraynes (vicky) "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Lovely Liz! Yes, there really IS little sense in wishing upon a star.. it's not the stars that hear it, and why would anyone open mail, not addressed to them?! *_^ You have such a sweet way to say things Liz.. loved this.. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
True......very inspiring piece, Liz! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is by far my favorite poem. i give you 2 thumbs up. =0) |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Elizabeth..this poem is AMAZING!!! wow..this really is beautiful..I printed it out & its in my office now! Thanks! ...beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Loved it, Liz! Wishing upon a star can never bring our fate. Our fate is in our own hands, very nicely illustrated idea.. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Elizabeth, I love the way you penned this. Stunning work! Beth~ |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Thanks for the reminder that our fate is in our own hands. Great job. Dawn |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
bravo!...most excellent work...thanks for the great read... "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Lovely peice and so true!!! Julie :) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
What a great message in such amazing words! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow...this is wonderful! the title attracted me and i gotta tell ya, the words astounded me. never thought of it like that before, but you are right they're just silly beliefs we've sought after through time, but the only luck we get will be the luck as we say written or inscribed for us well in my religion. so thanks for sharing this. salooma |
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