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Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-07-28 11:14 AM

Your light oscillates
On this humid summers eve
Nocturnal sparkles

Earthbound twinkling stars
(No heat from your fire is felt)
Dance in open fields

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2000-07-28 05:34 PM

Dennis; Splendid! "nocturnal sparkles"!
how perfect is that line! Your gift for writing haiku is astounding! Love, Sis< !signature-->

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 07-28-2000).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2000-07-29 12:38 PM

   Dennis-
     I think I'm developing a new
     appreciation for haiku.  You
     make it look so easy.  I am
     truely in awe.

     -vlraynes

     "I have read your words, and within
      them I have found your heart.
                       -vlraynes

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

3 posted 2000-07-29 01:19 AM

dennis..love these! but the last lines are my favorites:

"Nocturnal sparkles"
and
"Dance in open fields"

wonderful!!

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran

Brenda Hall
Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 88
Texas,USA

4 posted 2000-07-29 08:16 AM

Hi! Dennis!

I am not sure what Haiku means,but I have seen it often lately. I like what I read and keep up with the good work.Maybe,once I learn more about Haiku,then I may appreciate it more!

GBU!
Brenda Hall

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-07-29 11:21 AM

Dennis~

This is simply brilliant.
The image of the stars springs immediately to life.

'Your light oscillates
On this humid summers eve
Nocturnal sparkles'

What a beauty you have penned.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

6 posted 2000-07-30 07:34 AM

So pretty, Dennis!!!

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

7 posted 2000-07-30 10:10 PM

Dennis,
Your Haiku's are just great- I'll have to write some more-They are addictive- & fun once you get started! David

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