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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
for my special friend _________________ you say she's an open book perhaps but have you read the entire story have you looked beyond the written word and touched the tear-stained pages did you feel the flame searing your fingers as you caressed the edges where the pages have been burned and torn did you take the time to read each passage crying with the tears laughing with the joy and tenderly embracing the pain did you learn the soul that dwells beneath the cover an open book perhaps but read not only with your eyes but open your heart as well once you've read the story don't toss it on the shelf keep it hold it close to your heart for never was a more beautiful work composed -vlraynes ...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Elegence in motion. How we need to peek inside and take a look as you say inside the book. Great Job. I love this piece. Look forward to more. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
vlraynes, Wow, there is no better way to view a person then by reading the complete book from cover to cover. I love this poem, I think you did a fabulous job, you are very talented. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
an excellent reminder to us all not to "judge a book by its cover"...like the way you incorporate this saying into your poem here |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Life is a book filled with pages no one can write.....perhaps people are too. Good poem Jon |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
....this is where they read the book tricks sometimes only a poet truly knows a poet.. ..of course you know, this is one of my favorites...! and well written i might add dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is a very touching poem...So profound and true. You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VLRaynes~ Oh, YES ! The library of the books of my friends have many dog-eared pages of favorite recalls. This is a splendid piece of your talent. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I wish more people would take the time to read the inside of our books. Great piece. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hi, everybody. Thank you so much for all your kind words. I've been very fortunate to have 'read' some truely special 'books' over the years. Thank you for letting me share this one with you. -vlraynes (vicky) "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-29-2000).] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Very true, vlraynes... don judge a book by its cover is the morale of the story rite? I LIKE THIS *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Michelle- Thanks for reading. I really appreciate your comments. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Denise- Thanks for your response. Glad you like it. This one is very close to my heart. A reminder of a very special 'book'. -vlraynes (vicky) "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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