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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Have you ever loved another, Your heart within, it burned, With passions sweet desires, But that love was not returned? Have you ever seen a sunset, Too glorious for mortal eye, Tried to capture with a camera, But it's radiance, film denied? Have you ever had a craving, For something oh so sweet, Only to be disappointed, By an unsatisfying treat? We oft seek things external, To fill a voided part, When we need to work internal, To mend a broken heart. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Nothing like a good cry on a Friday morning. Did you write this one for me? LOL...I am dealing right now with my first broken heart, and this poem speaks so much truth about how I am feeling. It is a great poem, Dennis..thank you. You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah! Truth masked as good poetry! A very good poem Dennis.  |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Dennis, This poem speaks volumes to me. I love it! Dawn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis: This is a beautiful poem, Bro. The wisdom is perfect. We do need to look inside for the healing to begin and our needs to be met. "for the Kingdom of God is within you". This is one of your very best. Love, Sis Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dennis- All I can say is, "Wow!". So sad, and so true. Brings back some, not so distant, memories. This one touched my heart. Thank you for that.  -vlraynes (vicky) "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oooh...that hit home... "We oft seek things external, To fill a voided part, When we need to work internal, To mend a broken heart." this one says a lot dennis...i like it much..and i think at some point in our lives all of us can identify..! as usual, great writing dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow Dennis, This poem is fabulous, quite the message you send out through it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ 'Have you ever seen a sunset, Too glorius for mortal eye, Tried to capture with a camera, But it's radiance, film denied?' I have ! I tucked it away with the Polaroid's in my mind. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Yes, i have..Dennis *winkZ* You've opened up mi third eye with this *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Dear Brother, I think we've all been ther--done that in one way or another--and I say that not to minimize your point but to show we all need application of it. So often we settle for unfulfilling substitues & fillers in our life when, if we go about it right we could have the real thing. Great Poem-you've got my vote! David |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wise words, Dennis! Denise |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
The verse that DGV has highlighted I agree is something special Dennis. Nice One Jon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so true! |
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