Dripping with Ant-icipations?(haiku)

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Dripping with Ant-icipations?(haiku)

Euclid the Kid
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since 2000-07-15

Posts 51
Eugene,Oregon

0 posted 2000-07-27 10:43 PM

Trees begin to wave
darkness fills the summer sky
Gusty torrents sweep.

The ants burrow down
nothing out there,they're missing
whole thing is called off.

Still more summer left
Maybe we can reschedule
Ants say they will come.

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

1 posted 2000-07-28 08:14 AM

Cute title! I like this one, Euclid...good job!.....beth

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

2 posted 2000-07-28 08:59 AM

Euclid,
Wonderful picnic scene(well cancelled picnic that is) I like the use of your supporting characters! WELL DONE!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-07-29 11:29 AM

Euclid~

Adorable - adorable - adorable !

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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allan
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since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

4 posted 2000-07-29 06:28 PM

I loved these. Great sense of humour!

Euclid the Kid
Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 51
Eugene,Oregon

5 posted 2000-07-29 06:46 PM

Thank you all for commenting on my first attempt. I especially appreciate Dennis who has patiently instructed me in the different form of poetry. Dean

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

6 posted 2000-07-29 07:22 PM

Very good for a first attempt, but then you had an excellent teacher I see from you comments above. Keep up the good work! ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-07-29 09:02 PM

Very cute!

Denise

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

8 posted 2000-07-30 11:40 PM

Beary kewl, Euclid!!! *S*

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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