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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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Give me your tiny hand We feel the warmth of being Ageless beyond stars We are here to be Not to have too much you see Not to build a prison Give me your sweet love I will give you all of mine What more can we need? Time is friend and foe A friend who lets you forget Though forgets not you Now I kiss your eyes As you sleep for one last time I will love, always [This message has been edited by allan (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
What a beautiful, moving poem...Its flows so graciously..I love it! You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Allan, This is Good! I like the way this progresses. Nice job. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this is hauntingly beautiful...i like " a friend who lets you forget...Though forgets not you" very well expressed  |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Wow, it's beautiful.. its' great love, man - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Allan, this is fantastic! Each verse can be taken as a poem in itself, but they can also be considered as a whole. How did you manage that? I'm jealous! And above all, there is a lot of wisdom in your words. Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Woooo allan! This is soooooo sweet! *S* little words...big meanings love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
love this allan..you do great work! dg ps..chkd out your webpage the other day..very interesting..lots there..will have to go back for another peek "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thanks everybody! You're great folks!  |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
^_^ Well done Allan.. loved this.. a delicate piece.. -Lynne |
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