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the sound of us. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
listen. . . what do you hear? hearts beating souls meeting hands folding arms holding joining minds love finds love sounds passion found the sound of you the sound of me the sound of us. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Beautiful simplicity. Very enjoyable. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I agree with kevin!! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
short and soooo sweet |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
like a passionate postcard my friend...a beautiful description of a moment in time. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sigh Sven, you could melt candles jusy by whispering this poem. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Sven! Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . Your replies are very welcome. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Sven~ How very lovely - from the title to the lovely melody found within your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Sven, lovely and romantic as always *sighs* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marge, thank you as always my friend. . . glad that you really liked. . . Starr, thank you. . .glad to see you again!! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thought you could get it passed me did ya!!!!! Well I found it !! I am glad I did. This is very soft and tender Sven. Another beauty from you. Now don't ever hide it again!!!!! LOL Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sven- Love this! Simple and beautiful. vlraynes |
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