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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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my workbench is brown i toil darkened by black oils but within, rainbows thinking, i look in what i see is reflection best to look, don't think a pretty hayfield waving in air's ocean two birds eat no fish my head is pure stone my legs and arms of fine wood but i am of air |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
allan ...this is very interesting..i'm not sure i understand it, perhaps the way you understand it..but i really like it....  dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Allan, A delightful surreal vision of the ordinary! Well done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a man disillusioned with his work takes a breather to day-dream....not sure if i interpreted this right but that is how i see this poem  |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
As long as we can dream we're ok ... * sigh * Or are these some riddles that I am too stupid to solve? I love your writing, allan. Why are you so good? I'm jealous! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
two birds eat no fish hehhhe this is interesting, allan...*S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allan~ How reflective. I greatly enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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