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Jonas
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since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2000-07-20 07:01 PM

Salvation

Your melodic voice
carrying me on streams
between conscious thought and dreams.

Merging…
to become the threshold
of new beginnings amidst delicate rains
and mountain top mists.
Where every breath and whisper
magically creates another chapter
in this never-ending tale.

A story of rescue,
and of a broken life made whole again.

O’ glorious salvation!
This precious gift,
received from the delicate hands
of a golden tressed angel.
May you live inside me forever,
as my love for you
will only grow stronger with each breath.

This is my tale of redemption.
Written with feathered pen,
silently...in love’s secret language.
Bound in warm leather,
and stitched with delicate threads
of golden promises.

7/20/2000
Gary Pence

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-07-20 07:38 PM

This is beautiful!

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

2 posted 2000-07-21 08:14 AM

This is a wonderful poem..the words are so beautiful!

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

3 posted 2000-07-21 01:06 PM

Gary this is wonderful. You caress the reader lovingly and gently with your words.

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-07-21 07:44 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Gary! Very well written!

Denise

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

5 posted 2000-07-22 12:52 PM

Thank you all, very much!

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

6 posted 2000-07-22 10:01 AM

Gary, How do you do it, how do you so peacefully write these love poems? After I read them I feel I am floating away into the clouds in an aura of tranquility. Excellent job as always, your poems are most enjoyable if you couldn't tell.

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

7 posted 2000-07-25 02:48 AM

This is divine, Jonas......love flows out so beautifully from ur creation......*S*

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2000-07-29 12:32 PM

Jonas~

I've been captured by this lovely piece.

'This is my tale of redemption.
Written with feathered pen,
silently...in love’s secret language.
Bound in warm leather,
and stitched with delicate threads
of golden promises.'

My how the 'threads' weave me into this 'Salvation'.

A fine piece of writing, sir.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

9 posted 2000-08-03 10:52 PM

Wonderful salvation that is hard to find. I'm glad you found it in your rhymn.

Great job

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

10 posted 2000-08-04 06:55 PM

Thank you again everyone! I'm glad you and enjoyed this poem

"Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

11 posted 2000-08-04 07:08 PM

Absolutely breathtaking!! Good job.

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