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The Rose - for a_little_girl |
Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
I have a garden at my place, Spread through soil and sun's embrace It grows a little every day, And gains its beauty every way. In this garden is a rose, Beautiful as lovers' prose And with a feeling all its own In my heart this rose has grown. Splendor I can't comprehend, My eyes from this I cannot rend Gorgeous extreme, beyond a doubt This rose I cannot do without. It was planted 'round the same Time as I first heard her name Spoken softly as a word From heaven, or sung by a bird. The rose, it grew through winter days Late from January's haze On through February too, I thought I'd found my life anew. Today this rose, in summer time, Drives me on to make this rhyme For the one I love the most, From the caring Holy Ghost. Her beauty is beyond compare, (Couldn't find better anywhere!) I feel a blessing in her grin, And see her beauty deep within. Doubtless she was heaven sent, Into my life, an angel went. Little Spyro T. Dragon [This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
*choking up a bit* Ummmm...I'm really unsure of what to say right now... but four words do come to mind... I love you too... --the little one |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a beautiful tribute Spyro "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Deliciously romantic! |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Lovely. Warm and romantic. Nicely written. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Chokingly sweet! *S* It was planted 'round the same Time as I first heard her name Spoken softly as a word From heaven, or sung by a bird. This stanza sounds so dear! If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Spyro~ Very pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, Sam! This is wonderful! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Sam! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Sam i have a soft spot for rhyming poems and this is just so beautiful i wish both of you well and may the two of you be as devoted to each other always |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
so sweet..i love it when you guys write back and forth to each other..! dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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