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yesterday,today,tomarrow

EroseGrover
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 44
SD,CA 92126

0 posted 2000-07-12 06:58 AM

Yesterday the clouds cried
above our bare heads
leaving us thinking and without a care

Today I see a day with great hope
sweet scents of rose
drifft through our nose

Tomarrow I say will be a great day
for my Mind will be in the clouds
and for that will be the day
my soul burns with great passion.

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2000-07-12 07:03 AM

Golly I love this! All trivial thought of the day comes together in this piece! Keep posting! *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2000-07-12 11:06 PM

i like this positive, optimistic faith the speaker holds towards the future...embrace the unknown...i do hope i will remember that

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-07-15 01:58 PM

Erose~
Enjoyed the hope of this one.

'Today I see a day with great hope'

~*Marge*~

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