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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
No peace Glass shatters Darkens my fear Deep red blood Mixed with a single salty tear Poor twisted little souls Falling into Hell Carresed and decieved Rescued by the doorbell Opened the door Met by police Took my father away There's still no peace This was written in response to an old, OLD challenge in which we were asked to write about an abused child. I never got around to doing it until about a month ago. Hope y'all enjoy! PS- haven't been here in forever, How is everyone??? Eventually, all dreams come tru. If you wait long enough! Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Just fine, Alicia, how have you been? I'd say you met the challenge very well! Denise |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Simple yet honest, true and blue... U painted a picture with ur literature! Thanks for sharing this poem. I believe many children can relate to this tragedy. *S* Moving! If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome back,Alicia  i enjoyed the way this poem was protrayed with just a few simple lines...well done |
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