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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Sleepy fog tendrils Stretched across the new morn sky Chased away by Sun |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Bro; Do your talents never cease? This is very lovely. Sis Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ell |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Simply beautiful! An exquisite portrayal of the morn... Every waking-up each day won't be so hard for me if I paste ur words by my bedside! *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and a brand new day awaits!!!  this uplifts my spirits,it does!  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i love this idea of morning! awesome.. i agree with midnightblues--i'll have to paste this one on my eyelids so i'll read it when i dont want to get up in the morning!! heehee..this is more like me (in a flash..): groggily i moan as i fall upon the floor of an early morn  dg"A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ This is perfect ! You master this technique with ease. Fog shrouds the morning Breathtaking dawn awakens Daybreak is complete ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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