NightMare (sequel to DreamWorld)

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NightMare (sequel to DreamWorld)

chibi_dragon
Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 58

0 posted 2000-07-11 01:04 AM

I tumble from the skies,
and resist those eerie eyes,
the eye of darkness.
Pulling me in,
into a nightmare.

There is fog,
there are Specters.
Reaching out to me,
from the bog,
into a nightmare.

I cannot take flight no more,
I cannot see light no more,
Wishing that I wasn't there,
gasping for air,
in this nightmare.

Yet always there is hope,
even in the Bog of Despair.
I struggle and fly,
up out of there.
But still not out of;
My nightmare.

I see you,
as I struggle and flap.
And I grab on to your hand,
hoping to get out of this land.
This land of nightmares.

You pull me out,
and not too soon.
If I stayed there,
It would've been my doom,
that land of nightmares.

--Chibi.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

1 posted 2000-07-11 02:59 AM

this is a powerful intense read..have this reader rooting for the speaker,hoping for him to escape this terrible land of nightmare and am glad to know at the end that he did escape

enjoyed this read

[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 07-11-2000).]

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

2 posted 2000-07-11 06:08 PM

A perfect definition of a nightmare...eerie too. *shivers* and deep.
--the little one

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

3 posted 2000-07-12 06:31 AM

Hey chibi! ur poems never fail to intrigue me! Vote!! ... hey gimme more ... *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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