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here it is, the sequel!!

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

0 posted 2000-07-10 10:31 AM

Hi guys, here's the sequel to my untitled yet poem!

happy ending! ----------------------------------------------------

‘Alex
When you came along
My lonesome dream
Became a song
Promise me you’re here to stay
Love me dearly
Night and day’

‘Dear darling
The first time I looked into your eyes
They told me that you need a guy
He who treasures you
As you are
And not just any who
The person
My heart tells me
Is none other than
This lonesome me’

Two lonely dreamers come together
Their hopes will never be forever
Longing will become endearment
Cherishing becomes affection
Hold on to each other true
For there will be no two other
With the same dreams as you

No more lonely days
No storms
For in their hearts
There’s only warmth

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

1 posted 2000-07-10 11:36 AM

Beautiful piece. The dreamers are lucky at least. I long to see more work from you. It moves my very heart and soul.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2000-07-10 06:45 PM

This poem is so romantic and beautiful.
I love it! Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ell

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

3 posted 2000-07-10 10:55 PM

MidnightB,
And a Beautiful sequel it is!!! After that stormy start, this is the wonderful calm after the storm, sweet and serene! Well done!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-07-15 01:01 PM

Midnight~
Enjoyed this read for sure.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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