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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
With your sensual swirl and your hypnotic sway Carry me with you...... take me away Your quivering flounces caressing your hips The wells of your eyes and your soft moistened lips Your hands arching skyward Castanets high Your screams of fulfilment your shuddering sigh My heart racing with you is pounding the beat The moon looks upon in the shimmering heat The music is stroking a climatic phrase Perspiration glistens my eyes are a glaze Your smooth silken back in ebony lace Flickering lanterns lighting you face You pass me so close my nostrils are flared The scent that surrounds you has my feelings bared And then in a moment your frozen upright Like a statue a goddess your sinews are tight The thunder begins from the tips of your toes And swiftly and sudden the trembling grows Your feelings unbridled the fan wafting fast To the heavens above your passions are cast Then one last crescendo bursts from your lips And is caught and caressed with my finger tips The instant applause is arresting and loud With shouts of ‘Bravo’ from the mesmerised crowd I sit all agog speechless and spent As you disappear to your shimmering tent Sweet Spanish lady so erotic and free Dance the flamenco.....dance it for me Jon Mewett |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Jon! So, I guess your trip went well?! ![]() Denise |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jon~ This is very pretty and takes one along in the beauty of the dance. Now WHO is that man salivating at the side table ??? ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx Denise ...Yep I enjoyed the trip. Thanx Marge.....Well there was this guy on the other table and....... Thanx again ![]() Jon |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Wow.. what a scene.. ^_^ Yeah, I'd love to see some real flamenco dancing.. I have seen glimpses on television, and in books.. but still.. Well written.. glad you enjoyed your trip. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW Jon, I have to meet this dancing woman. lol. A wonderful poem, perfectly capturing the energy beauty and passion of that dance. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Omigosh...I can see that spanish lady! Over there over there!! Heh love it lots! *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx everybody you are very kind. As you probably know my family have suffered a loss recently,so I'm absent for a while but I'll get 'round to your poems soon. Regards Jon |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Incredible job, Jon! ![]() ![]() [A little something on the side - the Spanish Lady was also a type of influenza that...well, let's just say it made a LOT of people very, VERY unhappy...and I do mean unhappy...but I don't think this wonderful poem would be related to anything so...well...unpleasant.] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx little dragon nice to hear from you again.......thanx for your kind words. Jon |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
What a sensual (and sexy) poem you have written...The dance of a woman who hypnotizes a man with the movements of her body and the passion in her eyes...I think I might have to take up Flamenco dancing ..hehe :0)< !signature--> You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
wow, what a flaminco lady 'Buenos'!!!!.. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Jon, You did a fabulous job writing this poem, I love it. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx LD As usual very kind Jon |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Wow! You made this poem so real and it just came alive as you used your pen like a video camera, I could feel that beat and see the dancer in my minds eye so vividly! Fabulous job! Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx Ellie----That spanish lady seems a long way off right now...... Jon |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Hey this way great! very good imagery I loved it !!! |
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