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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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I sat outside in the sun writing this one as nature harmonized in my ears, and brought the thoughts flooding into my mind. I have some ideas for the title, but not sure which is best. I appreciate any help I can get, usually I don't get stumped like this.  The silence of a minute blase in solitude of harmony. Then to hear natures language all amass together in unison, ones song inspiring another till there's a serenade of beauty. Magically they've got me entranced in their universal dialog of love, enchanting each other with another song like all that matters is right now, tomorrow is not in their vocabulary this moment of feeling is their only reason. One day man may realize the true essence to loving one another comes from depth, not in what will you give me in return, but in what can I give that would compliment. What depth of beauty can I reflect upon that will make all your tomorrow's disappear? |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
titles, Summer reflections (I love the word reflection lol). solitude of harmony. Midsummer revelation. -------------- I think secretly that I hold out on title suggestions incase I think of a really good one and then feel bad about not suggesting it LOL. Anyway whatever the title is a beautiful piece flows wonderfully and gently like a cool summer breeze, whispering wisdom. excellent poem. "Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Love it! Hmmm I agree with brian...reflections seem like the right word! *S* keep posting keep posting!! *huGz* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
I was thinking 'Essence of hearts' or 'Serenede of Beauty' Which ever title you choose. The work is amazingly serene. Great job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
How about 'Enchanted Moment'? Beautiful poem, Gloria! Denise |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
This reminded me of a qoute I read recently..."Nothing matters more than this day" I don't know who said it, but it's now one of my favorites. This poem describes the beauty of a moment in nature well, beautifuly. I like all the titles suggested. I can't think of one myself though. Like you, drained for ideas! Would it be so bad to leave it titless? Whatever you choose, it won't change the poem, which I loved, can you tell? Smiles to you!Joy |
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White Knight Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 92 |
Lost Dreamer, How 'bout "Natures Serenade"? This is what came to mind for me LOL The White Knight [This message has been edited by White Knight (edited 07-09-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Personally, i like Midsummer revelation...seems to me to sum up this poem best..a vital life's message understood(Seize the day as it is) in the midst of nature's beauty....if only i were to be inspired similarly so!!hmmm....  |
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toes21 Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 24 |
Deep tried and true, is much of the content in your poem, a pleasure to have read it. |
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