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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore 
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When he walked out A storm was brewing up Dusky and engulfing the sky Yet she felt so divine She doesn’t want to stop there She still wants a man Second walk-out This time she’s sad Telling herself, love’s like that Still she wishes for another romance Come again Storm and rain Teach her a lesson For loving in vain If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Midnightblues, You say you want a suggestion fo a title, how 'bout "STORMY WEATHER"? Just a thought! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Geee Dennis that was nice *S* Thanks! GO GO! Lets see what kinda feelings my poem conveys to ppl.....love ya peeps! If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
How 'bout "Searching through the storms", or "Loving in Vain". Although I like Dennis' title to.  Great piece I hope she finds the lesson taught from Lonely nights. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Kevin, thanks! Hmm 'Loving in Vain' sounds like her...heh *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
course there is always, "Love Bites" and maybe the sequel... "Love Bites, and Then You Die" lol thought i'd lighten things up a bit... sorry for the odd sense of humor... gee y'all think love has bitten the biker? after all the name is...< !signature--> bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" [This message has been edited by bleeding (edited 07-08-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
really enjoyed the poem, my brain is still half a sleep, title...surviving the storm. "Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Hi, M: Loved this poem, very surreal...how about... "Loves Storms of hope"... Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
bleeding - nup I love ur sense of humour! That was kewl... I've already decided to do a sequel!haha u really read my mind... brian - surviving the storm...yeah she did! I wouldn't have thought of that myself. Thanks! *S* ellie - I did have this feeling when this piece came to mind! *huGz* Love Storms of Hope...she's really hopeful isn't she? Golly peeps u guys pamper me...I'm falling in love with our corner pub! If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
midnight blues, how about "Stormy Survivor"?--she certainly seems to be this optimistic survivor alright like the ending very much...leaves this reader wondering whether if her postivity would deflate or still remain strong |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi kaile, yeap my heroine is so optimistic...I must say I can't take too many heartbreaks. I guess this dream is actually my 'wish'. Kudos to all women seeking for love! Their all 'Survivors of the Storm'! If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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