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dr tung Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 55singapore |
as i reach my hands to touch her i did it like a joke but what i wanted to show her was that i love her so so i reach my hand to feel her on her head a gentle pat she grabbed my hand so tightly if only courage i had i would tell her "i love you" something i kept inside of me till then i couldn't say it heck just let it be seize the chance i was thinking but damn i felt afraid couldn't help not feeling she'll turn and walk away we grasp our hands so tightly although i love her so i released my hands so gently that step i could not go as i reflect on that minute my heart felt much regret i swear next time i'll do it not another lost chance had |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I hope next time you have the courage it takes to make that step. Thanks for sharing your feelings in a poem here with us. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Simple words, yet conveys feelings in-depth...I've seen your previous poems b4 I became a member.....Like your style. Keep posting ok? *winkZ* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes we have to work up our courage. Great poem! Denise |
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