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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA 
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Captured moments snapped Preserved, all the world to see Polaroid magic Oh how embarrassing! S'pose I can disappear these? Prisoners of time Dressed both in paper and ink Tokens of the past To help jog our memory Evidence, it so happened. Erie smiles grin As ghosts of a distant past Times predating us To help us feel attachment And to fill out the picture. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Even those embarassing pictures are made to cherish to our hearts.  Great piece. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
David, Say CHEESE! Though you've entertained me, the price for Those negatives is still the same, LOL, these are Great! Your risk taking is paying off big dividends! TANKA, TANKA, TANKA for the memories! BRAVO BROTHER! Dennis :^) < !signature--> Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 07-01-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
David; Can't wait to see those vacation pictures and I bet there better than you describe. I hope I'm being sent some samples? Great job here, Bro Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well,perhaps deleeme,you should just giggle graciously on your not-so-flattering pictures...thats what i do always.. im awed at the way you often take on something and cast a refreshing light on it in your haiku/tanka....show us more!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! These are great, David! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ Wonderful moments you've captured. Almost a KODAK moment ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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