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Standing at the Edge of Insanity |
chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
---------------------------------------------- What is Insanity? A sea or a lake? Or a never ending hole? Or is it when you lose your soul? Can Insanity be a sign of things foretold? Or a symbol of power, a power old? Yet it comes in different forms, Forms untold of, forms unknown. It creeps into the back of your soul, and stays there, unwanted. There is not a soul that isn't haunted, by this unwelcomed ghost. ---------------------------------------------- --Chibi Dragon "I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by maddness, starving hysterical naked." Allen Ginsberg [This message has been edited by chibi_dragon (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Wow. This is getting deep. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Chibi! Just a note: You have a typo in the first line of the second verse, 'Isantity', I think you meant 'Insanity'. Also, I would suggest that you delete the message at the top since you have designated this to be voted for as a book submission, only the body of the poem should be posted, not notes to the readers. Denise |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
I enjoyed to read this post it seems so much that I agree. great job. looking forward to reading more. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I agree with Wren...this is getting deep! I'm stunned. Hey keep it going! I love it. If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
This is amazing! The beautiful, alluring depiction of insanity is breathtakingly beautiful. I am yearning to read more. TAP2 |
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