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kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

0 posted 2000-07-04 10:59 AM

Lovers Fight

Crystal shards on the floor.
Broken glass and so much more.

Blood stained tile upon the floor.
Me me wonder, what for.

How can love turn to hate?
She was home he was late.

How can they both demise?
They caught each other by surprise.

Who was mad and whom was right?
Tell ya now husband and wife.

The lovers there knew no fair.
They fought both tooth and nail.

They walked out with out a doubt.
Both their names clear of the spout.

For it was husband and wife,
Whom lost the battle that fatal night.
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Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

[This message has been edited by kelieth (edited 07-04-2000).]

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 2000-07-04 03:28 PM

Kevin, This one goes ouch! in my mind.
Can I have some aspirin? ~grin~

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2000-07-04 07:28 PM

very great piece. and its funny how both sides always seem to lose.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

chibi_dragon
Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 58

3 posted 2000-07-05 12:29 PM

Painfully well done. The reality is rather bad, considering the hurt that people's relationships go through.

--the cute dragon

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

4 posted 2000-07-06 10:18 AM

Wow the scenario seems so tragic! But I like it...sort of melancholic and regretful

But realistic though...grrr violence! *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

5 posted 2000-07-06 10:21 AM

Wow the scenario seems so tragic! But I like it...sort of melancholic and regretful

But realistic though...grrr violence! *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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