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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA 
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Oh what things I see With my mind's eye,eyelids closed Vivid midnight shows! Changed reality Oh what possibilities And it seems so real! Mind's free matinee In sub-conscious darkness plays A private screening. With a changing cast Yet most often I'm involved Acting out strange parts. Oft' they make no sense These wierd nocturnal visions Amuse nonetheless. Nightly tidbits weaved Snatched from my reality Fiction's fantasies! |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
David, WOW nicely told theme Haikus! Well done! Dennis :^) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very dreamy!  Denise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~David~ As always very creative and unique haikus  I loved these! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
David; I like the weaving of the theme here and the dreamy feel they evoke. These are so .. abstract and artistically poetic. You are so good at this! Ellie/Sis Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ Very enjoyable, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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