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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
On the eve, Of our love, We were blessed, From above. Your soft blond hair, Sea green eyes. Brightened up, My very life. I held you So very close. I felt you shudder, No breeze to pose You and I, Love entertwined, Like the ivy, That grew outside. Closer than two Bodies could come. Souls touching The fire of love. The sweet hot feel, Of passionate breaths. Rasped and warm Passed our lips. Moveing to, A private dance. Love hath, Given us the chance. To procure A lasting vow. Securing love To us right now. The joing of, Our two souls. Allowed a child, to soon be born. ___________________________________________________ I write this to a never ending memory of my wife and the son I almost had. They are the inspiration to a lot of my posts. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Kevin, This is such a beautiful poem, you express the love the two of you shared delightfully. May each day the light shine a little brighter on your soul. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Kevin: This lovely tribute touched my heart. I feel the love that you describe here and it is beautiful! Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Keleith - Another beautiful poem that sounds as if it is coming straight from the heart. A wonderful love expressed beautifully. Bonnie |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kevin, You paint such a sweet and romantic vision with your words! WOW! Did someone turn the airconditioner off here in the Pub? I feel a heat wave! It's getting hot in here! WHEW! Dennis :^) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
"You and I, Love entertwined, Like the ivy, That grew outside." My favorite lines. Lovely poem, straight from the heart. Joy |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Kevin, a beautiful poem and wonderful tribute. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes a wonderful piece truely heart felt. please do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
mm, what a sweet poem.. beautiful tribute to your wife.. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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