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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Maybe in Distance Maybe in distance, but never in heart will my desires ever be able to impart. The little vibrations of thought waves placed into action blankets and paves, a path of desperation I couldn't touch, without the aid of knowledge to crutch. See, your pack of angels would devour my longing soul with such divine power, to find my heart again near impossible, so I cling to distance because it's plausible. [This message has been edited by Esmeralda Ponsonby (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A wonderful piece this be!! It has been great to see all the talents of others taking a single phrase and writing around and about it in soo very many ways!! I do like this!!! Thank You for taking my challenge...it was a pleasure to read it!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Esmeralda, This is Great!The part I liked best was: See your pack of angels would devour my longing soul with such divine power, to find my heart again near impossible, so I cling to distance because it's plausible Great writing! Dennis :^) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Esmeralda, an excellent poem. wonderful response to the challenge. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
short easy INTENSE read...like the way you express so much in so few lines.... i too like the last two lines best: to find my heart again near impossible so i cling to distance because it's plausible [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, intense and well written! Very well done, Esmeralda! Denise |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
I thank you all most kindly for reading and replying, it's much appreciated. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Excellent Job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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