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Casonova
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 35
Mays Landing

0 posted 2000-06-23 05:43 PM

One Last Kiss

If I could Just prove,
  My love is true,
Without a hesitation,
  I would die for you!
And in that last moment,
  Between life and death,
That you'd be there Present,
  To fell my last breath.
I'd look into your eyes,
  And hold your hand.
And together we'd laugh,
  Of all we'd planed.
I would wipe away,
  A tear from your eye.
I'd smile and whisper,
  There's no need to cry.

Then as my heart,
  Takes a slower pace,
I'd take one last look,
  At your beutiful face.
And with A shaking finger,
  I'd trace your lips,
And all I would ask,
  Is ONE LAST KISS...

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Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach.

[This message has been edited by Casonova (edited 06-24-2000).]

Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

1 posted 2000-06-23 06:18 PM

Great poem! Words cannot describe it from these lips. Hope to see more like that.

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

2 posted 2000-06-23 09:21 PM

Casonova,

This is a beautiful poem. Oh how I long to find the man of my dreams... This is my first post to the forums, but it definately won't be my last. Keep writing the beautiful poetry...

Dawn

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-06-23 10:05 PM

Beautiful love poem!

Denise

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

4 posted 2000-06-24 03:12 PM

Then as my heart,
  Takes a slower pace,
I'd take one last look,
  At your beutiful face.
And with A shaking finger,
  I'd trace your lips,
And all I would ask,
  Is ONE LAST KISS...

beautifully written, Casonova

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral.
Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Casonova
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 35
Mays Landing

5 posted 2000-06-24 04:58 PM

Thank you all for responding, I appreciate your comments. And Callie, I'm sure I'm not the first to say this, but welcome to the pub, I'm sure you'll enjoy it.. thanks again all.

Casonova...< !signature-->

Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach.

[This message has been edited by Casonova (edited 06-24-2000).]

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2000-06-24 07:16 PM

Such is the touching awesome power of UNDYING love and i think you have done very well here

i dont usually read love poetry cos they always seem false and cliched to me but moi will look out for your love poetry(?) in the near future

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