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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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You took everything, Including my pride, When you left that day, All alone I just cried! Our savings, our future, Dissappeared as a mist, I really got angry, I really was pisst! Now you want forgivness, Say it was a mistake, You seek reconciliation, How much can I take? Will I ever again trust you ? I'll have trouble with that part, Maybe in a distance, But never in heart! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Dennis, Excellent job on this, I like it. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Exellent poem. I like this one and even have a name that it fits.  Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Dennis, Even your darker poetry is treated nicely with a dose of humour...Love the last stanza lots |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh I so loved what you did with it!! Kaile is right about the last stanza!!!! Challenge met well, Thank You for taking it!! Like it lots!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Now you want forgivness, Say it was a mistake, You seek reconciliation, How much can I take? excellent response to the challenge. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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