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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Meadow...again Moon hangs, almost full pieces of cloud scatter, glide in soft, summer breeze. We lay in our meadow listening to the sound of night her head nestled on my arm. Night air made for kissing dances upon our skin chilling wherever is damp. She stirs, quietly calls my name hangs on summer eve floats about our meadow. She sighs, moves closer snuggling in, once again her breath stirs, awakens. Hands join in gentle caress exploration shared and renewed oh so smooth and lovely. We turn, lips meeting slow, softly, delicate building quickly to demand. Crying out, beginning and end collapsing, breathing ragged moon hangs, slightly fuller. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
very romantic Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eLJ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful and romantic!  Denise |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Very good. Tender, sweet and romantic. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
You are such a romantic bro!! This is beautiful. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
This was so peaceful and serene and romantic I loved it Good Job!!! |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
ah..gee see bleeding turn colors. y'all made me blush... thank you, bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Cowgirl Jane New Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 8 |
This is a poem many of us have tried to write, eh? I loved it. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Great poem I could feel the emotion. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
mm, a sweet poem.. ^^ I love your poetry, always so expressive Lynne |
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