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A Harsh Life lived the remaining part. |
kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
All the posts on the first part of my life have given me the strength and encouragement to finish the post. Thank you all. ____________________________________________________ A Harsh life lived: Settlin In Two years went by He turned eighteen, The man found love Or so it seeed. They got married In one short year At age nineteen He had to cheer. They concieved, On their wedding night. Farther to be It seemed so right. Life is good For man and wife Work was hard To always fight. The months flew by So rapidly Til the day They knew it'd be. A little boy, Both their hearts overjoyed The news Came from tests before. ____________________________________________________ A Harsh Life: Loss At eight months, His birthday came So much in love No complaints. She said she'd Meet him at the park He agreed to Meet 'fore dark His relief was running late And so was he. He rushed to where They said they'd meet. He approached, The dim lit spot The flashing lights His heart did stop. Their before him On the ground His wife did lay Cold, Face down. The stomach that Did move around Now was still They heard no sounds They said the bullets Missed their mark But killed the same, In that cold park He kneeled close down To her side Took her hand And softly cried ____________________________________________________ A Harsh Life Lived: What's left to be All that's left Is five long years Now you know Most his fears There is so much more to tell I'll write it down You'll hear it well. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Kevin, I don't know what to say, I'm sitting here ready to cry. I'm sorry, I'll be back. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kevin, A sad story indeed, but you are amoung friends who all have battle scars from this thing we call life. Our griefs and losses may not compare what you've been through but know this, we are friends who share and care for our family here at Passions. Looking forward to your future posts. Dennis :^) |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
and I'm sitting here thinking that one of my poems now has a dedication sticker on it...yowch! I don't know if I could go through something like that... You must be an incredibly strong person to have survived so much tragedy in your life. Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Well, amazed I am you sure are a strong soul, and what a fabulous job you've done writing about your life. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmmmmm....wow... dennis is right--we are the battle- scarred...glad you feel certain about joining us and sharing your own scars...this is a good place to share keep your chin up kevin.. and keep writing about life..writing heals dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Your story touches me deeply. You have been through a lot. Words fail me, I'm sorry for your loss. You have done a wonderful job writting these events in poem. You have made me ashamed to have complained about events in my own life. You show such strength,still. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
oh my, i dont know what to say....i'm sorry such terrible things have occured in your life...i know no amount of words can ease the pain and anguish in you but if you are feeling real down, drop me an e-mail and i will be glad to chat God bless |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Oh, kelieth, i don't know what to say.. I am glad u felt u were able to share this with us.. keep writing, we are all here for you.. here for one another.. Lynne |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
It takes courage to write a poem like this. A heartbreaking story and very well written. |
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