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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN 
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I've been gone for awhile and I feel a bit out of place. Not sure if i'm forgoten or if i've been takin' out of the race. I use to write about things that were sad and blue. I've also wrote about a broken heart or two. things have been good. nothing has been that bad. No tears or broken hearts. No reason to be sad. i don't know how to write about the things that make me smile. i keep on trying but it's taking awhile. i found a guy here (in michigan) that i like too see but i'm scared to get to attached for the fear he'll leave me. I go to church now and i'm trying to live my life right my family criticizes me cuz they think i should have changed over night. I'm going to try coming back and try to make writing not a chore and maybe i'll feel like i belong once more. < !signature--> Don't fear failure so much that you refuse to try new things. The saddest summary of a life contains three descriptions: could have, might have, and should have. --Louis Boone [This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 06-11-2000).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Never feel you don't belong, no matter how you write or what you write about you will always be a part of what our eyes love to read. Welcome back and i look forward to more of what you have to offer us.  |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Glad to see you back, with a new song in your heart. The Lord is still working on me too and Rome wasn't build in a day, so the old saying goes.. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Welcome back fe. I wrote a poem 'Passion Land'posted recently that sought of says it all. Jon |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Fe - when I read someones work I don't look for perfection. I look for feelings and passion. Both of these I've found when reading your work. Welcome back. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
I don't see where you don't belong at all. I enjoy the poem completely. Good luck with the Guy ( in Michigan ). Kevin. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
well done.. hey, but u belong here! ^_^ Well, I haven't seen u in here be4, but if u r a poet, which I can clearly see u r, then hey! U r always welcome! nah, we love to read ur poetry, just run with the words, you'll be able to write cheerfully eventually.. ^_^ I'm trying to write cheerfully too, as I used to write quite depressed poetry.. Good on ya "Just another fe" Lynne |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
just_another_fe,of course you belong here!though i believe our words have never met their aquaintance but well, i will be looking out for your works and commenting on them Passions is such a big family and theres permanent residence for u here |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
its so easy to write about the pain isnt it but when the time is right, you'll write the story of sunshine in the sky too...  and dont ask yourself to be perfect in writing it--my brother once quoted to me, "perfection has no character" heres to sunny poetry fe! dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
just_another_fe, you'll always belong here. Welcome back and with such an emotionally expressed poem. Hope to see more of you.  |
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