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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida ![]() |
Thorn-Bit such beauty is the provenance of pain... as i looked i beheld a softness; velvet for my fingertips. in the morn i saw a dewdrop resting peacefully on your face. i reached for you to hold you close that i might fully enjoy your beauty-- such beauty is the provenance of pain; thorn-bit... dgvarner "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Absolutely beautiful!!! I loved it. ![]() |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
wowthisissuchgreatpoetry!! ^_^ I loved this, truly serene, beautiful words.. Lynne |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Beauty indeed. very beautiful Jon |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..thanks guys--youre too kind! i didnt expect such great comments on this one.. ![]() it makes such a difference to get all the replies... ![]() dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
velvet for my fingertips...What a pretty line! Good Job, it's a sweet poem! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was wonderful DG ... I loved the flow and feel of this poem, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Great poem. "love hurts" an expression I know well. Enjoyed it. ![]() Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Oh, I think I like your's so much more. It's so graceful, and gentle, where mine was more searching to find the beauty, than finding it there so beautifully. Thanks for sharing yours I really enjoyed it. ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
debbie--thats my favorite line too ![]() kit--thanks for the "well done" pat on the back ![]() kelieth--yes..love does hurt..i know it pretty well myself!...but when it feels good, it feels REAL good doesnt it! ![]() lost dreamer--i'm glad you liked it ![]() ![]() Â "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 06-13-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DG, What a beautiful poem, tender and sweet but with a POINT! Love has it's risk, and beauty has its thorns. Very nice. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow!! ![]() ![]() Kind of keeps me in touch with nature, in the midst of all the urban chaos. ![]() Dragons DO need their time like that, you know! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DGVarner~ This is just the essence of the beauty of the rose. Lovely ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
BEE-OO-TEE-FOOL!!! Golly I love this! Darn if I could write like this *poutZ* heh gimme more!*S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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