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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Snake swallows mouse whole~ Feel this helplessness too well~ Soul devoured by fear |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow... Talk about few words with great meaning! Good job, kaile!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
wow.. eery!! great Haiku Kaile.. ooh that poor little mouse!! *_^ nicely said.. Lynne |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Gulp >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>..I feel small  Jon |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
damn snake.... Snake swallows mouse whole~ Feel this helplessness too well~ Soul devoured by fear Fear is like a snake, first it slowly wraps itself around you then it squeezes hard until you can't move only then does it swallow you. wonderful poem, alot in those three lines. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Soul devoured by fear... indeed! clever use of metaphors... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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