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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
There was a love It flew away On broken wings The other day It started slow It ended fast There was no middle It couldn't last She flew so swiftly As quick as a wink And took it all Except the sink I still wonder My heart won't beat Even took my horse To save her feet. I'm sorry, JLD. Please don't let it end this way. Let me stay with you. DB |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
SO sad when this happens DB  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Don't know why, but I especialy liked the last line... Took my horse to save her feet. Hope everything works out for you, btw. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad, Deep Blue. I think most of us can relate to this. Well done poem! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very heartfelt piece... I can appreciate your pain DBM... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
 I hope your plea is heard. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
LoL How can I resist that? I'll bring the horse back as soon as I can  Always with you DB....always! JLD Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I enjoyed this very much especially the last line.....a short and sweet hearfelt plea!! Nicely done!! Take Care Bridgette |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
sigh...beautiful poem...and even though I'm only 14, I've been through it twice. Great work, truly great work. "Those who mourn their loss Are those with the most love And hold the greatest gift there is to give." -Kadoresh Part 10,'The Guidestone' "The Artisan's Gate" |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
very sad...but it looks like your plea was answered....woohoo...hehe |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
When I read your poem I was sad and then I read the replies.....and I was happy !  Wonderful poem Deep Blue ! |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Very moving... I thought this was excellent.. I'm glad your pleas were heard. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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