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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas 
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Ok the first poem I've written in months... maybe the muse hasn't entirely deserted me after all !!! The moon ate up the dazzling sun And lit the stars all one by one The wind whispered a melody Soothing the soul setting the spirit free My mind swims in a sea of stars Unbound from life's confining bars The night claims and swallows me Blinding my mind, I can finally see Becoming entangled in a dizzying haze Until I become the stars at which I gaze Floating on the clouds in my mind Leaving reality far far behind Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm right there with ya! Thanks for taking me along!  Denise |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Hold on tight Denise I'm right behind you. Take it away S G Jon |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
I'm a star watcher. My telescope stands ever ready. It's nice to think of being able to see things from the perspective of a star. Lovely sentiment, lovely poem. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I love every line of this, it is not the quanity that counts but the quality and I would say this is A-1. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Star, Loved this one. "Blinding my mind, I can finally see"; I agree with everyone else, A-1. marcy |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Thanks Denise, John, Jana, Septsong, Marcy ...It feels good just to be able to pick up my pen and write again writers block had me thinking I would never write anything but I finally did !!! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is awesome, I love it, glad you got your muse back. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Ohh, I really like how you became one with the night. Lovely scene, lovely poem. marcy |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Very lovely and tranquil! This is a treasure Kim |
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