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Casonova
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 35
Mays Landing

0 posted 2000-06-01 05:43 PM

Jen, I hate to leave you,
  I know you'll take good care.
It's not because of you that I worry
  But the other idiots out there
the ones that would use you,
  Just to have a little fun.
And then toss you away,
  when the feel they are done.
Jen you're a special girl,
  And you deserve so much more
Don't let any idiot take away,
  What you can never restore.
Find someone you love,
  And who loves you too.
Who will listen to your problems,
  And help you through.
Someone who will cry with you,
  And then wipe away your tears.
Who will hold your hand,
  As you conquer your fears.
Someone who will fulfill your dreams
  As his dreams he shares.
Who will constantly remind you
  Of how much he cares
Someone who loves your smile,
  And loves your eyes.
And sees through that pretty face,
  A longing for no lies.

And when you find him,
  Never let him get away.
Just find the perfect one,
  this is all I pray
well I'm going to sign off,
  Before I start to cry.
For you have been an awesome friend,
  And that is no lie...


This is written to My best friend, who happens to be a girl, Who I will be leaving, so it is kinda hard for me right now...

Jana Tovey
Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 257
USA

1 posted 2000-06-01 08:09 PM

You may be physically leaving your friend, but I think she knows that you'll always be there for her. This is a really sweet tribute. You are a good friend to have, I think.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-06-01 08:37 PM

This is very sweet and touching.

Denise

Casonova
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 35
Mays Landing

3 posted 2000-06-02 05:53 PM

Thank you both for responding, And Jana, i thin your right, At least i hope so. thanks again...

Casonova.

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

4 posted 2000-06-02 09:56 PM

I enjoyed meeting you in this poem. So nice to have friends who care this much. I found your poem simply beautiful. marcy

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2000-06-02 11:23 PM

cas..

every girl could benefit from having a friend like you..
it seems you love deeply--even your friends..

its a good thing, love..and it comes in many packages!

i hope youve let jen read these words from your heart too

dg

"A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

Casonova
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 35
Mays Landing

6 posted 2000-06-03 08:05 PM

Alle'cram, I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you very much for the kind words. dgvarner, I just hope that i will be able to find a friend like Jen, where I'm moving too, that is the only draw back about getting to close to someone, that you have to let them go.
well, thanks again, take care...

Casonova.< !signature-->

Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach.

[This message has been edited by Casonova (edited 06-03-2000).]

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