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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Without Words Three words in which to say What I feel for you But do you think I can say them? No, I can’t it’s true I can make the strong man Weep tears of joy or sorrow My words can tell a story of A yesterday or tomorrow My dictionary and thesaurus Hold the words within their covers Those words I’ve read countless times Written by so many others Do you think I can write them Here upon this page in black Or will they stay upon my lips Unsaid, so I can’t take them back If you knew how much I need To tell you how I feel If only I had those three words My love I could reveal. [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 05-31-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hard sometimes to say them, aye? but if you keep the words to yourself, the people you love may never know...  < !signature-->"A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 05-31-2000).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Never know what kind of place those key words will open and unlock when they are spoken to unlock the door to the secret of our own heart. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those words can sometimes be the hardest of all to say. Excellent poem, Sharon. Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Somethings may be hard to say, but better to share how you feel than keep it inside! Hmmn, 3 words...I forgive you? I love you? I hate you? You bore me? You stress me!? LOL I could go on and on here but I won't  I love it! |
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Jester59701 Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154 |
Awesome Sharon! I think you've said it, as the title implies, "Without words". Excellent! Jester |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
Sometimes, actions speak louder than words...maybe they already know how you feel. This is quite a touching piece. You have a way with words. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind words. I wondered what would happen if a poet had all the words at her disposal but still couldn't put them to good use..after all, words are our 'business'...hmmm thanks again.  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Gather up your courage and SAY THEM!!!! For it is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved.....have to risk to get the just rewards, my friend. Courage and strength be with you!!  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Wierd how it seems hardest to say those three little words when you know for a fact that is how you feel ... Good job! |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Three little words: I am you? You are me? Oh sugar that's more than three. Great poem Jon |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
Three words that spell out how one feels. Yet sometimes the hardest to say. Beautiful |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Poet deVine, "Without Words". Your poem so true and a good reminder. Hard words (for me) to say sometimes, especially to people I love the most and need to say, although already knowing! Thank you for this one. marcy |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
those three words you may not have said but your love and affection you have showed plainly within this one....lucky me for reading this...NICE! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PdV, thankfully you're words were not "me, myself" and "I"... well done, m'dear! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sometimes I find it more difficult to keep the words in. They fall out of my mouth at the most inopportune moments. Beautiful words, whether said or not.. Sandra |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
there are certain things that words will never be able to fully express especially love. You can write the greatest love poem ever but only you will know what that love feels like, if you can feel the love in your heart then you do not need words to express it. That said thank you for expressing your poem and sharing it with the forum, a wonderful piece. My dictionary and thesaurus Hold the words within their covers Those words I’ve read countless times Written by so many others Do you think I can write them Here upon this page in black Or will they stay upon my lips Unsaid, so I can’t take them back ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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