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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Simple Life's Pleasures Sun pops out from sea~ Blue-gold waters reflect glow~ Rays of warmth calm souls Fireflies Haiku Grey clouds blanket sky~ Darkness sets, lost bat depressed~ Light specks shine my way |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
kaile.."lost bat depressed?" heehee..i like that one! "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
hehe, great kaile.. yeah I like that bit best too.. "darkness sets, lost bat depressed".. ^_^ well done.. Lynne |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, These are good, keep writing them! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate As the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance! D.L.White :^) |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Hmmm... the first one abt sunrise, why blue-gold water? Hmm... If I recall correctly, at dawn, the water ain't that blue yet... yes, it's kinda goldish, coz of the sun's rays... Oh!! I like the "lost bat"... hehe You were referring to your confused self??  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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