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Palace (repost from Dark) |
Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
I built my palace on white washed island's sand. Violent foaming waves rush & swirl around it. They come to close,crashing in on my castle,will it stand??¿ I pile up autumn leaves to keep off the waves that treaten to pound it. Do i really expect to fight them off with that??¿ All the sad thoughts flooding in with passion, just to knock me down FLAT. I better build on black rocks next time,keep my house from crashin'. It's a sad thing that i continue to do, i make myself feel worse & worse from thinking so much. I don't even WANT to feel better it's true. I only think of everyone's pain & mine,death & such, but i guess i better quit & think of better things, start building on firmer soil or i'll come crashing down with salt water stings, dirty,wet,& spoiled. And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
swamp..good one..i like the idea of the castle on sand.. i guess we all go thru phases of black thoughts that seem overwhelming..hope you find/found your firmer soil "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
Glad you got back up and found firmer ground. But, alas, white sand is SO inviting! |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
dvgarner ~ i'm still looking,but working my way up slowly =] thanks for your comment =] jana ~ LOL...well i hate white,hence the representation of the white sands....it ad to be something weak and something hated. soooo.......Thanks for your comment too!! swampola And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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