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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Souls consumed with grief~ Heavens cry,healing dry lands~ Alluring laughter~ Buried in glorious rainfall~ Hands raised high, smiles wide, all dance [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 05-28-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is awsome!..it shows such victory in conquering the gloom.."glorious laughter...all dance..." i love the simplicity telling big detail  thanks for sharing!"A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, I like the contrast in this work, well done WRITE ON! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate As the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance! D.L.White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i have another Rain Dance Haiku to share  kid dances in rain to be scolded by his mum for wetting his clothes |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is so creative, kaile. Wonderful feeling and lovely images...Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Rain makes everything seem better huh nice poem |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Lovely message of hope and renewal of life. "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Nice thoughts. Merry Christmas to you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Very nice images, Kaile! Like the haiku, too. Merry Christmas.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice mental image you've given me......makes me want rain!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nicely done, I like it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Ha! I thot the rain dance haiku was funny  |
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