The Corner Pub |
Rejoicing in the Music (Lost Dreamers Challenge) |
childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I twirl around and laugh with glee, the beat of the music takes over me. I step and I sway, I spin and I dip, I too am a klutz but don't give a s--t! Music fills me with joy I feel free on the floor I won't sit to rest my soul cries out for more. What better place to dance? Where is a better club? Then the one my friends frequent, a place called the Corner Pub? < !signature--> ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 05-25-2000).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Awesome, I love your poem, it's perfect for the challenge. It is so upbeat and spirited, great job. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Lets dance all night everybody! Tango, mambo! LOL! Joy |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
Wonderful To twirl and dance forever and a day. breezeinnc |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
Kim, your a kick, that sounds like something I would do, care free and I like it. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i usually dance in the dark!!..but a dance in the pub sounds fun too i like the fun, happy-go-lucky, dont-give-a-d*mn attitude!! you dance!! "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nice one childomine--Ditto lost dreamer's comments--your ending was perfect for the challenge and i chuckled when i read it.. |
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