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Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

0 posted 2000-05-20 08:49 PM

  Darkness swirls around and
consumes me and a paralyzing
fear holds me.
  The dream reveals to me my
worst fear.
  I struggle to awaken but the
dream has complete and utter
control.
  It keeps me suspended in my
boiling emotions of: Fear, Hate,
and Anger, and a nearly choking
sorrow.
  Finally the dream releases it's
tortuos hold.
  I wake up to find myself crying and
as I concentrate the images flash back
to me.
  I pray then...
  I pray that this dream doesn't come
true..

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2000-05-21 12:34 PM

Whoaaaaaa I know exactly how this poem feels. These are the frightening things I am trying to escape from. But yet is it possible to rid urself of nightmares? Dunno, but I am sure gonna try!

Great Poem!!!!

Dark_kisses

I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

2 posted 2000-05-21 02:35 AM

Oh, this is sad. Sometimes talking about your dreams to someone helps. Close family member had the same re-occurring nighmares, through the tears and head in hands crying finally got the dreaded dream spoken, diserned and peace came. He was only ten. I hope your bad dreams go away!! Marcy

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2000-05-21 02:53 AM

wow.. amazing writing! ^_^ yeah, dreams like that are.. well, they are dreams like that, lol! ^_^ I think the only nightmare I have really had, was a while ago, when i had the most horrifying, repetitive nightmare.. I could never remember it when i woke, but I used to sleep talk, and sleep walk because of it, and live it for a while after I had woken.. hehe, at least u can draw a line between dreaming and reality, eh?

well done..

Lynne

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-05-21 10:21 AM

Very good! You have expressed well the feelings generated by a nightmare!

Denise

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

5 posted 2000-05-22 04:21 AM

There's a state of suspension between sleeping and waking that's wierd,it's kind of thrilling and frightening at the same time.

I've been there it felt like this poem to me.

nice

Jon

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

6 posted 2000-05-22 11:03 AM

Your mind is amazing isn't it? I know many a time when I wake up I thank God my dreams aren't real.

Joy

Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

7 posted 2000-05-23 09:02 PM

Thank you all for your genorous comments and I hope to write some new poetry soon for you all.

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