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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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I would like to apologize to all of you for my lack of responses lately, this poem kind of explains it, I'm going through some kind of crisis in my mind, and I hope I can concur it soon. Playing Free The ax is chopping away who I am or more the who I've grown up to be, my mind spins on axis playing me. The sum of twenty plus nineteen equals a very innocent seventeen, my mind spins on axis playing mean. Yesterday, today, tomorrow does any of it matter as weeds grow? My mind spins on axis playing sorrow. The master slyly hides the key then charges an exuberant amount called a fee, my mind spins on axis playing free. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Cheer up, Gloria, everything will be okay. HUGS Denise |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Dreamer, Good poem. It has a deep meaning in my opinion. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
mm.. nice poem.. made me think.. well written, deep emotional poem.. Hugzz.. Lynne |
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