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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon 
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Walking Towards The Light Together we have travelled, Along this dusty, rocky road. Sometimes we have stumbled, Or stopped to ease the load. Ahead of us we can see A future brighter than the sun. But this road lying here before us Is strewn with what's left to be done. Behind us is a ribbon Of a road that we have paved. 'Twas rocky when we walked it Smooth now with decisions we had made. Lots of times we stumbled, And sometimes we even fell But, up we got to finish This walk through living hell. Heaven is in front of us. We can see it shining bright. Through a veil of dust and tears, We keep on walking towards the light. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
excellant as usual sister mine! Glad to see you back love D bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
When you find the grail you can be blinded by the light. But hold on tight. It'll help you through the night. It's just around the bend. Lovely Jon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Shawna!  Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Shawna this is BEAUTIFUL! I love how you describe the walk, ribbons behind and the Light in front. WOOHOO I love it! |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
beautiful. i am speechless. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Dan..thanks, lately things have been real weird. This sums it up. Jon...thanks for your reply and I believe it is just around the bend. Denise...thanks so much. 'Becca...you are such a sweet person and you always know the right things to say at just the time. Thank you so much! Alicia...thanks so much for your reply. |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Shawna, Very nice piece of work you've done here. I enjoyed it very much! Kris the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WildChild~ Seems a short walk down the road, when the light is in sight. Wonderful thoughts on display. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
WildChild, Loved this poem, beautifully written with such wisdom. The rocky road behind, now ribbon, ever looking toward the Light. LOVED IT. Blessings |
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