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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida ![]() |
5-15-00 for: abc BREATHE i listened as your voice faded to silence. then through the air i could hear you breathe, soft and rythmic in my ear. i closed my eyes and i could almost feel your soft breath on my skin. i could feel the warmth of your body next to mine. i wanted to reach for you to touch your face, your lips. i wanted to hold your hand in mine. i listened as i willed myself to open my eyes... pressing the reciever closer to my ear, i sighed--a quiet sigh. maybe soon you'll be near enough to touch... until then, i listen-- i dont want to miss a breath... --dgvarner |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Welcome to the pub. Lovely first post. You'll like it here Jon |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
mmmm so romantic! Welcome to Passions. Hope to see many more of your poems. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, dgvarner! This is lovely! Please check your e-mail for a special welcome! Denise |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I can only ditto the above. Beautiful first post, I know you will love it here! The Pub is a place of friends and best friends! Welcome! Alicia |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thank you--all of you ![]() |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
I know you have so many poems, but this is a wonderful first poem for others to share. we all hope to see many more here. thank you for sharing breezeinnc |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- love this one. i can just picture you there on the phone with him...just listening to him breathe. very nice. ![]() love ya, -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I like this one. ![]() Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is beautiful. I can indeed feel exactly what the subject is feeling. And I was pleased to see your thanks to breezeinnc, who also sent me here. ![]() To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem was extremely sweet. I loved it. Just picturing everything described within the poem made me smile. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DG, Wow! I missed your first post, I'm glad it came up to the top again! This is a beautiful poem of longing and patient expectation. A belated welcome to Passions! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
breeze..forgive me..i never did say thank you for your reply..many thanks to you ![]() tricks..i miss him..i still miss him.. maria..thank you ![]() k..this is a "feel-good" poem..so i'm glad you could feel it.. ![]() dopey..glad i could lend a smile ![]() dennis..yes, my friend, it seems you did miss my first post ![]() ![]() hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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