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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Love...ahhhhhh love Oh what can it mean? When it comes from way down deep It is like something you have never seen Smiles...ahhhhh smiles Oh what can they do? When given to a special person They will give them back too Winks...ahhhhhh winks Oh why do we do them? When given with a smile He might turn the lights on dim Hugs...ahhhhh hugs Oh why do they feel so good? When someone feels sad It'll make them feel as they should Touching...ahhhhhh touching Oh why do we do always lean? When we feel the world is overbearing It can create love unseen Holding hands...ahhhhh holding hands Oh why is it we are so fond? When touching someone this way It shows a very special bond Words...ahhhhhh words Oh why do we not say them more? We take advantage of what we have And dont realize it till they walk out the door I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very beautiful!  Denise |
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patricianne Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 66 |
Very nice, glad it didn't get all mushy. It sailed along smoothly, just hit you with a bit of a jolt at the end, I liked!  |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Love comes in a breath and goes in a sigh. Very lovely Jon |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good poem...I love the last line!  |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Dark_kisses, It's great to see you again. (smiles) what a poem to read from you again as well. How is your journey coming?? I hope I got that right (laughing). from, Kurly |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
nice writing! ^_^ Lynne |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love this one!! It is very beautifully written. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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