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Casonova
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 35
Mays Landing

0 posted 2000-05-15 05:59 PM

We all have our dream mate
    we want to meet someday
hoping that somehow fate
    will take us that way
It could be a Movie star
    or some great celebrity
Or someone really bizzare
    If that tickles you fantasy
But mine was far better
   than anyone of these
for she was brought on a feather
   by imagination's soft breeze
she had a perfect Smile
   that no artist could portray
and no writer could compile
   the words she would say
Her Body was perfect
   in each and every way
You could not find a single defect
   if you looked all day
She had long and flowing hair
   That could never be caught
And there is no one who could campare
    Or so I thought

For until I met you
    She was absolutleyr flawless
But shes now number two
    for my dream you now posses
her smile looks like a frown
    when it's next to yours
and your hair looks like a crown
   when it's compared to hers
Her body seems all deformed
   When I Think of you
For you seem so uniformed
   in everything you do
So You are now my dream mate
   In each and every way
And I am begging fate
    to make you came my way
And Uhm.. If it's not to late
   Fate Please don't delay...

)

                                                Casonova !

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-15 08:49 PM

Very cute, Casanova!

Denise

epoet
Member

since 2000-05-11

Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa

2 posted 2000-05-16 10:41 AM

very intriquing. what was inspiration? written very well. good content

Wobbly Head Bob
Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 299
Virginia, USA

3 posted 2000-05-16 11:27 AM

That was really cool. Casanova for sure! *lol* I liked the the scheme it worked well and for the most part flowed wondefully, I laughed at the end! This was a good one, lookin' for more!

Casonova
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 35
Mays Landing

4 posted 2000-05-16 06:47 PM

Thanks all, for your replies, i am glad you enjoyed it, cause I enjoyed writing it, and to be honest with you, I am not exactly sure what made me write it, The Idea just came to me so I put it in a poem, and this is what came out, thanks again for taking the time to reply.

"love and Hugs"
Casonova.

[This message has been edited by Casonova (edited 05-16-2000).]

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