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I am (my other half) ((answer to challange part 2))
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Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
I am Dark, soul twisted in the light I wonder what people see when I walk past I hear whispers in the dark I see forms that call me forth I want to free my mind, feel it all I am Dark, soul twisted in the light I pretend to be all powerful, my might unmatched I feel a dead touch against my soul I touch the darkness, whole and empty I worry that life is meaningless, what’s the point of just being I cry Why is it some people only see this side of me I am Dark, soul twisted in the light I understand something are never as they seem I say people are sometimes sheep, waiting for the slaughter I dream of the darkness and it’s cold embrace I try to find hope, but the darkness is more I hope to find peace, though the darkness always calls I am Dark, soul twisted in the light |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I like your other side better, this one sounds too dark and dreary.  |
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Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
 Ok, I thought I better explain my actions for the three posts. Any way, I goanna post this note in all three poems, just in case people decide to read them in a different order or something like that.The reason for the three posts work like this: (My Better half) This is me 90% of my life, how I devote my time and my view towards others.) (My other half) as nay of you have seen with my other poems I went through a very dark time in my life, this is 10% of my life which I let free everyonce in a while. (My Whole) This explains my view on myself at all times this is my reason for doing the things I do. Thanks for hearing me out. May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 I tend to think you have days like this very rarely.. But then again.. Who knows?I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Thanks for an inside look but i hope these kind of days are not frequent with you Strosek Jack |
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